The Forbidden Vermilion Vision — Duty vs. Destiny
Destiny is a great concept, but defiance is what sells books. Destined love shouldn’t flow in a straight line; it should be a battlefield — otherwise the plot would be boring, and readers would slam your book shut. To make a fated romance truly unputdownable, you must give your characters a compelling reason or two to say no. The reasons to resist must be significant and logical. The harder the character fights the bond, the harder the reader falls for them.
In Threads of Red, Ellie encounters visual imagery of red as she goes about her daily life — a framed piece of modern art inside a restaurant depicting a crimson splotch, her son’s school project made with scarlet strings, raspberry syrup swirled around a cannoli, a family of bright red cardinals perched atop a tree branch. She also experiences dreams and visions — a vermilion scarf swept by the wind as she clings to Ezekiel on the back of his Ducati, a prominent rich red feather in a Native American’s headdress, ruby-red gossamers entangling them in dreams, a glowing cherry light that feels welcoming. The imagery, whether a physical object, a fleeting glimpse of the future, or an impossible dream that feels as real as starlight, draws her in, making it increasingly difficult for her to resist as time goes on. Still, she fights the ancient magic.
Ellie’s unexplainable dreams and visions of Hollywood superstar Ezekiel Larson aren't just confusing — they are agonizing. She is overwhelmed by him. His staggering good looks, his golden-teak eyes, his velvet yet commanding voice — his entire persona. A physical pang lingers in her belly at the very sight of him. He occupies her waking thoughts and comes alive in her dreams.
But Ellie is a married woman, committed to Craig, her college sweetheart. It is an obligation she made when she vowed to be his wife until death parted them. She takes her title of wife and mother very seriously. In addition, she struggles with a reverse age gap. Ezekiel is younger than Ellie by more than a decade. The issue of his age establishes another instant roadblock for her. Never mind that he lives a Hollywood lifestyle across the country and is probably surrounded by an entourage and a gaggle of women hoping to be his chosen one — how would she ever get near him?
Boom, these are her logical reasons to resist the passion, the bond calling out to her, all the red signals she can’t avoid, the smoky-red dreams, and the man himself — Ezekiel Larson. Her existing marriage creates immediate internal conflict that weighs heavily on her soul. Ellie isn't looking for a fling; she is fighting a cosmic tug-of-war between her real-world loyalty and an inescapable supernatural pull toward a younger stranger. They are bound by an invisible cinnabar thread worthy of the Celtic era. Ultimately, she concludes he is out of her soccer mom league on too many levels to fathom. Is she right? Read Threads of Red to find out.
Even when faced with clear evidence from a tarot card reading where the Lovers card is pulled along with other cards signifying a destined relationship, and the red thread of fate is plucked from a velvet pouch containing the different colored threads of fate’s loom, Ellie continues to reject the inevitable. Her defiance is an empowering act of self-preservation that perfectly sets up a battle between the supernatural compulsion pecking at the inside of her mind, heart, and soul, and her refusal to blindly submit to its demands. Though her reasoning appears to be logical, on some level she knows it is flawed, because the harder she tries to hold him back, the stronger the pull from him becomes.
This character-driven plot device is disruptive to the narrative and the antithesis of the romance anchors discussed in a previous blog article. Ellie’s inner conflict about the vows she took, coupled with the reality of the current state of her marriage, introduces dramatic tension. It forces a shift from a predictable outcome to an unpredictable journey. In essence, this structural device stalls the journey. This delay is necessary for two reasons: it forces character growth and increases reader anticipation. This postponement will keep readers tearing through the pages to reach the moment the fated mates finally cross paths, leaving them breathlessly hooked on what lies ahead.
A fated mates romance shouldn't feel like a foregone conclusion. By introducing logical internal roadblocks — like Ellie’s real-world marital loyalty and her struggle with a reverse age gap — I transform a cosmic mandate into a conflicted human choice. If you want to captivate your readers and keep them obsessed with the story, don't give your characters an easy path to destiny. Make them fight for it.
Delve into the pages of Threads of Red and strap in for the sweeping epic love story of Ellie and Ezekiel.
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